LeYochaim's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Zero Dragon ep.2]

CRAZY BETTER

i just reviewed your submission for runaway shinobi
i mentioned how it was choppy, and that the fight scene should be smoother

you pulled it off kid
good job

I'd say if you keep submissions like this, then you'll be excellent

still waiting for that huge fight scene tho

[Runaway Shinobi]

It has a lot of potential

A lot of things in this were good, such as the graphics or the picture of the people you drew, and at times it had a good mood that was set for the story.

However, there are somethings that you could use help on, such as : make the movement of the characters flow much more smoothly. The fight scenes seemed extremely choppy and it was hard to follow what kind of attacks were being dealt with. The story was a little hard to follow since the names were introduced so quickly, and it quickly changed scenes often, so maybe more introduction or less depth of story. Good choice of music, i really liked it. The movie seemed to be serious the whole time, and then it tried to be funny at some parts... the jokes just felt awkward/out of place. The sound quality was kinda shitty, but its hard to get good equipment. Uh... also for a lot of the movie the people talked in english... i think... but then at random times they would talk in japanese? chinese? i dont know... but not english...

Overall the submission has a lot of potential to do better, and i'm sure you'll get the hang of being able to make the submissions great.

Saw your latest submission, seems like your improving. But for advice, the main thing that would have made this movie kick ass would have been if the fighting was a lot smoother. So hopefully episode to to Zero Dragon will have a better fight scene.

Hope advice helps at all, otherwise your good, just some things you can improve on to make the submission a classic :D.

["target practice" W.W.W]

wow

ok about what that other guy said. The movie was not about the answer to how to solve this, it was just a movie. This movie was mainly a joke, and shut the fuck up about his voice, who cares, there are fags out there with cool voices and kool people with fag voices...ur the one who sounds like a fag, someone that just fuckin goes around makin people feel bad. its shits like you that fuckin make people kill themselves. Now, instead of putting your review into a nice way of sayin it, u just say it sucks and its ripped material, but who cares...like u or anybody here on newgrounds is gunna make it big onto tv or something. Now, the comments by the author were about the boy's background, and the flash was just a joke to spin off of another way of how things happend. SO PEOPLE PLEASE ACTUALLY GET LIVES INSTEAD OF MAKIN FUN OF PEOPLE, try and actually make someone's life easier... i thought it was a decent movie, good job

[Cheese Puff Ep.2]

better

you made me think it was funny...but i didnt really laugh aloud...its much better than the first one however...keep improvin

[Cheese Puff Ep.1]

alright

not a very good movie...not very funny...basic kid type cartoon funny. go deeper with the jokes

[Legend of Legion: Ep. 1]

i dunno

what was happenin...i couldnt tell who was bad
you need an intro to this character or somethin...good for first tho

[F E A R]

very good i thought she gunna die...

well played out mister. i would say keep up things like this. post more soon.